I have been steeped in the stories about my ancestors
since my birth. They may have even seeped into me through the walls of
the womb. Anna’s Secret is a story I’ve heard many times from various
people. The latest version was from my Uncle Harold. He said that one
of our own people was suspected of the crime of murdering Anne Beaton
with a turnip hoe. It was said that she was no better than she should
be and was doing a little marital wandering with someone in the
community. For a long time the smithy was suspected. He was in custody
for a period but was finally exonerated and left Prince Edward Island
for good. Ultimately the authorities decided that the crime was
perpetrated by a woman and was in fact, a crime of passion. This last
was pronounced with great relish. They never found the person
responsible. It seems that Anne had greatly riled a wronged wife, and
probably several.
The story caught my imagination and I
began to wonder: what if she wasn’t who they thought she was? What if
the reason for her murder was entirely different? What if the murderer
was discovered? Who would it be? Her husband? The wronged woman? The
man she was said to be involved with? There was a lot to play with
here. In a technical sense, how close to reality could I be without
offending descendents? Not too close, I decided. Anyway, it’s more fun
to write what pops into my mind and see how it plays out.
As
I wrote, the narrative opened like a flower as I examined the
individuals who I decided were involved. Who were they? What
relationship did they hold to Anna and to her family and to each other?
How did Old Annie figure into it? After all she was a daft old woman
who had to be transported to gatherings in a wheelbarrow because she
couldn’t be left alone. Most of the time she didn’t know anyone and
lived in her mind very far in the past with people she knew in her
youth. What did she have to do with Anna’s murder? After all, she and
Anna had been life-long friends.
And what did it do to
the community? Their sense of safety was shattered and people took to
locking their doors, some even in the daytime. This was in a community
that never locked its doors even in my grandmother’s time. I remember
this from my childhood. The only time the door was locked was if they
were going to be away for an extended period because, what if someone
needed something and they weren’t home to give it to them? I remember
my own mother telling me a story about an old man who peddled goods and
trinkets door-to-door. He was a little simple as they say here. They
woke up one morning and discovered him asleep on the lounge with a
blazing fire in the stove. After the murder, people were afraid to walk
out alone at night.
As the story progressed it took
awhile for me to realize who the real perpetrator was and the denouement
was almost as much a surprise to me as it will be to you.
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@MargaretWestlie on the Narrative of "Anna's Secret" Opening Like a Flower #HistFic #AmWriting #Mystery
Anna
Gillis, the midwife and neighbour in Mattie’s Story, has been found
killed. The close-knit community is deeply shaken by this eruption of
violence, and neighbours come together to help one another and to
discover the perpetrator. But the answer lies Anna’s secret, long
guarded by Old Annie, the last of the original Selkirk Settlers, and the
protagonist of An Irregular Marriage. Join the community! Read Anna’s
Secret and other novels by Margaret A. Westlie.
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Genre – Fiction, mystery, historical
Rating – G
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ANNA'S SECRET #Excerpt by @MargaretWestlie #Historical #Fiction #Mystery
“Someone’s
gone to great pains to leave her comfortable.” Angus stared down at
Anna. He was a church elder, and because of his wisdom, the unspoken
head of the community. The ten minutes since Neil had arrived with his
news had seemed an hour.
“Aye,
they have indeed.” Duncan regarded the neatness of Anna’s grey drugget
dress arranged modestly around her ankles, her folded hands lying across
her abdomen. “It’s more than she deserved.”
“Hush now, Duncan, it’s bad luck to speak ill of the dead.”
“Yes, Duncan, she might come back and haunt you,” said Hector, his pale blue eyes quite serious.
“Och,
Hector, you’re always thinking of ghosts.” Angus shook his grey head.
“The poor thing probably has more to do than come back and haunt the
likes of you.”
“She’s likely dancing in the hot place wishing for a bigger fan,” said Duncan.
A
giggle erupted from Neil who had been hovering at the periphery of the
small group of men. Angus looked hard at Duncan. “No more of that talk
now, in front of children.” He squatted down beside Anna. “Is this the
way you found her, Neil?”
“Yes, sir.”
“You didn’t touch her?”
“No, sir, only to shake her arm to see if she had just fallen asleep. She was stiff with the cold.”
Angus regarded Anna for another moment. “Help me turn her over, then.”
The
three men knelt and turned her onto her left side. A small swarm of
flies rose from their feast of sticky blood left on the pillow of yellow
straw that had supported her head.
“It must have been someone who cared about her to take such trouble with her remains,” said Hector.
“Aye, it’s as if she was being put to bed,” agreed Angus.
“One more time,” said Duncan.
“Who’s going to tell Ian?” asked Hector.
“I will,” said Angus. “He’s my own cousin and we’ve known each other since we were schoolboys.”
“But we’re his cousins, too,” said Duncan.
“Nevertheless, I will tell him. You two will follow with Anna’s remains.”
“We need something to carry her on,” said Hector.
“There’s the door to Murdoch’s house that’s fallen in,” said Neil.
“Run, then, and be quick about it. Go with him, Hector, he’ll not be able to carry it by himself.”
Hector
and Neil set out across the field where they had worked side by side
with Ian only a few days before. The oats had been thick that summer and
the straw had been plentiful, its shadowy roots home to field mice and
grass snakes and crickets. Murdoch’s house had long stood vacant, its
windows broken and its door fallen off its leather hinges. The roof had
blown off in a winter gale three years ago and now the whole structure
sat at a crazy angle not quite ready to fall into its cellar.
“You’re
lighter than I am,” said Hector. “Go in and get the other end of the
door, but mind where you step, it’s none of it very stable.”
The
floor creaked and moved even under Neil’s slight weight. A few moments
of careful manoeuvring freed the door from its bed of fallen rafters. In
a few minutes Hector and Neil returned to the others.
Neil
watched as Hector, Duncan and Angus loaded Anna’s remains onto the grey
planks of the door. A smear of blood darkened the wood as they
positioned her head for the journey home.
Hector shuddered. “Old Annie said this door would be smeared with the blood of the just.”
“Will you stop it, Hector,” said Duncan. “When did she say that?”
“The winter before Murdoch left for the Boston States.”
“That’s years ago, and Annie’s senile.”
“Not then she wasn’t. She said it as plain as day. I was there and I heard her.”
“And what did Murdoch think of all that?”
“There’s some say that’s the reason he left the Island.”
Anna
Gillis, the midwife and neighbour in Mattie’s Story, has been found
killed. The close-knit community is deeply shaken by this eruption of
violence, and neighbours come together to help one another and to
discover the perpetrator. But the answer lies Anna’s secret, long
guarded by Old Annie, the last of the original Selkirk Settlers, and the
protagonist of An Irregular Marriage. Join the community! Read Anna’s
Secret and other novels by Margaret A. Westlie.
Buy Now @ Amazon & Smashwords
Genre – Fiction, mystery, historical
Rating – G
More details about the author
Website http://www.margaretwestlie.com
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